Grade: 34/40
Introduction - 9
Presenting Both Arguments - 17/20
Conclusion - 8
Call to Action - ? missing
We will discuss Monday
( There are many grammar errors - remember to edit!)
About Me
- Ms. Humphries
- I graduated from Loyola University New Orleans (Geaux Wolfpack!) with a B.A. in Psychology. I recently completed two years as an AmeriCorps member during which I found a home at the Washington Middle School for Girls. Prior to WMSG, I worked as an adult education instructor for the Corrections Organized for Re-entry program (CORe). My mission at WMSG is to empower the students and stregnthen their voice. I hope to inspire a love of learning and a love of self.
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